This track really hits home , i appreciate the amount of creativity Javier Laflare put in the hook which drove the direction of this record , king Creole ear for the mixing I can’t thank enough for the professionalism and the stories told here today shows that we really live this and do this but started from the bottom , so keep pushing and get up ass up here with us 💯🙏
I think you could write more impactul lyrics. don't focus first on rhyming. focus on what you want to say, and the rhymes will come when you use more metaphors, similies, double entendres. etc. first verse had a dope cadence tho. likeable sound, jus be more transparent in your lyrics. 2nd verse had good lyrics. cool flow. 3rd verse is the most polished. sick beat. like the track and message. this style is similar to my own.
Bars: Dope 🔥
Delivery: Perfect 💯
Impression: Perfect 💯
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This track really hits home , i appreciate the amount of creativity Javier Laflare put in the hook which drove the direction of this record , king Creole ear for the mixing I can’t thank enough for the professionalism and the stories told here today shows that we really live this and do this but started from the bottom , so keep pushing and get up ass up here with us 💯🙏
TOUGH 😮💨 I’m KILLED IT 😵 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
job well done keep it coming hard and heavy nice work Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
good vibes good flow stay lit stay grinding and bussin Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
funking increíble
@rapfame_official another pick of the week that’s two lol
Love ❤️🔥 😇Follow me😇 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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@rapfame_official definitely pick of the week fam
Strong 🪨🪨 Powerful 💪💪💪 Knowledge iz???Da General Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Nice positive tip feel and creative. Has a “real” hip hop vibe. Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
HEAT 🥵 Juicy! 🍉 Word Up ⬆️ Woke 🧠 WOW ⚡ Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
I think you could write more impactul lyrics. don't focus first on rhyming. focus on what you want to say, and the rhymes will come when you use more metaphors, similies, double entendres. etc. first verse had a dope cadence tho. likeable sound, jus be more transparent in your lyrics. 2nd verse had good lyrics. cool flow. 3rd verse is the most polished. sick beat. like the track and message. this style is similar to my own. Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
aye y'all killed this fellas
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2 Hard ✅ BIG SMT
This was unexpected gold let’s goooo fellas!
Real talkRespect 🤜🤛 LIT 🔥 Keep grinding ✊ Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥