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yo what's up I don't know put the money in the bag you slag it drags he wears rags TV lags screw u man pack your bags your sat there with your flag he choked got poked in the pistol smoke haging you spoke what a joke your brocke listen to rock he's a jock collects rocks so don't talk go for a walk part of a cult not even a adult tell me why who the hell am I go cry mamma tells u a lullaby sad people think its a crime to spit a rhyme and tell em what's on my mind no sound proof room I'm doing this in my bed room I'll put you in your tomb what's account for the things you found your getting loud tune it down your brothers in the lost and found I'm messing with the crowd this time I'm in my prime earns nothing but dimes climbs crimes sometimes he wines get in the line of duty life is getting hard so draw your sord and slash the bord getting poor take u on a tour get a 12 gauge shotgun blow you to bits bank account un stable its on the fritz
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π΅ Impressive track! Looking forward to more! π Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Dope π₯
Yo @cosmic.10667260! Waddup. Thanks for sharing your song '???'! π₯ Here's some words of advice on the next one: 1. Practice makes perfect and you're on the right track! Keep on working on those details and the success will come. 2. Rap music is about the whole package! π¦ Be sure to show off all the skills that make you great! 3. Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! π§ 4. Keep experimenting with vocal effects! Sometimes less can even be more! π² Test different effect levels and settings to find the best balance! 5. Try using our denoise feature to reduce the background noise from your device! 6. Get immediate feedback on your track with Judge 4 Judge! You and another user simultaneously provide feedback for each other's track, helping you to level up on your next drop! π₯ It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π All the best, The Rap Fame team π
Keep up the work! A few more improvements and you onto a banger! π₯
You're not just talking, you're straightenin' things out! πΌ
The rapping was clean π§Ό but I didn't vibe with the beat, just my opinion!