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You said forever ya but- why did you have to lie wed been so perfect together i woulda had yo back till the end but you stabbed me in mine i still dont get it i loved you but you shoved me away when i needed you most now i just ghost cuz i cant get hurt like that again i act like im ok but the only reason im smiling is to fool myself into believing that ill get better but it only gets worse my bars are full of my broken thoughts i just feel dull you kept me at my best but now that your gone.. i cant take it i feel like your pawn my heart drowns in pain at night while you were the one who was sleeping tight i gave you everything but you shoved me away when i needed you most... now i just ghost. sitting in my room staring at the wall wondering why i shoudnt just end it all why did you have to lie got me feeling like i wanna die

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3 years ago

You said forever ya but- why did you have to lie wed been so perfect together i woulda had yo back till the end but you stabbed me in mine i still dont get it i loved you but you shoved me away when i needed you most now i just ghost cuz i cant get hurt like that again i act like im ok but the only reason im smiling is to fool myself into believing that ill get better but it only gets worse my bars are full of my broken thoughts i just feel dull you kept me at my best but now that your gone.. i cant take it i feel like your pawn my heart drowns in pain at night while you were the one who was sleeping tight i gave you everything but you shoved me away when i needed you most... now i just ghost. sitting in my room staring at the wall wondering why i shoudnt just end it all why did you have to lie got me feeling like i wanna die

dope beatFIRE 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯

3 years ago

beat dope 💪🏾 but won't cap bruh had me weak with the picture keep dropping them beats bruh Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

3 years ago

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#upkill new track click to listen. like I did yours

3 years ago

Yo @kalumisnotcool! Waddup. Thanks for sharing your song 'broken'! 💥 Here's some words of advice on the next one: 1. Practise 🙏 - If you don't get it first time, no worries, you can always give it another go! 2. Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 3. Try adding some of the in-app effects to your next track to take it to a whole new level. 4. Defo try out our denoise feature to minimize any background noise on your track! 🤫 5. Try entering one of our weekly contests for the chance at winning the $500 grand prize! 🥇 Overall this junt eat fam! Can't wait to see what else you drop! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Nice 🌟 Impression: On point 🎯

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

3 years ago

Killed it! 🎯 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

3 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

3 years ago

Stay lit ⚡ Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

3 years ago

💥💣💯 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

3 years ago

Stay lit ⚡ Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

3 years ago

like it Bars: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

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