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The autumn leaves are on the ground they’re supposed to be Leave less tress the winter snow begins to cover me The fire is warm the coffee is cold your bundled up close to me The world has stopped and no one knows that it’s just you and me So take a swim and as we ride the waves comfortably if you would walk away I’d hope that you’d come home to me hopefully My feet can walk to destinations that I dream to see motion with the wind a breath of life reminds me you again Another way that I can see you hopefully hopefully Travel far We ascend into thxe stars No where to go but here we are The gloves we have don’t feel the same when I hold your hand We sleep to rest and that is where it feels the best Don’t mind me it’s just my head I’ll clean up the mess That look I get is open ocean when there’s land ahead Some other time right now I think it’s best to turn away The road tend to travel makes me lose my way I’ll make a better life for you and I one day

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budrobryan

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3 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @budrobryan, We listened to your track 'hopefully', here's our report: Track Artwork ⭐️ Track Length ⭐️ Title ✅ Description ✅ Bars ✅ Cadence/Flow ✅ Delivery ✅ Vibe ⭐️ Concept ⭐️ Trending ⭐️ Recording quality ✅ It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame team 😎 ⭐ - Feature Worthy ✅ - Good Start 🛠 - Needs Improvement

TheNamesBlu

1 month ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Shavonte

6 months ago

Dope vibes on this track! 🙌 Can't stop replaying! Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉

Elijah Thomas

6 months ago

The grind is real, and so is the impact. Every effort is paying off! 💼💰 Keep grinding ✊ Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

SexyslimThegoddess🧿🔙sender

8 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥