Trip
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Intro Hey hey!! Yo it's your boy Ollyster Hey hey hey Chorus I'm back alive I thank my Gawd (thank my gawd) Fuck them bitches they wanna kill me Ran away So they can't see me See them niggas I felt some pity I run the crib You know That was good Look at them They look like ewe And look at me Wearing Gucci shoes. (yeah) I like to flex look My diamond tooth Verse 1 Oh my Gawd yeah i made it I Run the crib Don't mind the slips I pay the bills Look at me bro, Nigga I'm dripping Look the way am sipping Live in peace Life of Bliss All those niggas they can't compete
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Intro Hey hey!! Yo it's your boy Ollyster Hey hey hey Chorus I'm back alive I thank my Gawd (thank my gawd) Fuck them bitches they wanna kill me Ran away So they can't see me See them niggas I felt some pity I run the crib You know That was good Look at them They look like ewe And look at me Wearing Gucci shoes. (yeah) I like to flex look My diamond tooth Verse 1 Oh my Gawd yeah i made it I Run the crib Don't mind the slips I pay the bills Look at me bro, Nigga I'm dripping Look the way am sipping Live in peace Life of Bliss All those niggas they can't compete
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