Wassup @thaphatlady,
Thank you for sharing 'where does the end begin' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us:
Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. π Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π
Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! πΆ
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ
The flow definitely bled through the beat, we can tell you are passionate about getting this off your chest. Vocal tone is perfect. You just missing the clarity of mix and the recording is a bit muddy in places. We can def hear you moving around while recording.
This time you just missed out on Featuring π, but here's what you can do to make it next time:
- Try and test out the distance between you and the micπ€ before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! β¨
- Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! βπ₯
- Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! π
- The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! π―
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
I like this and the title is nice. love the beat here. great job on this track. π₯π₯΅
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didn't see this one coming.. nice build up. Definitely add a lil more volume to your voice in the editor. great job moving into that second beat!! this is the first track I haven't had to turn off ππ!! keep making this!! 315 to 345 are perfect. could feel the confidence. keep up the great work HMU whenever βΊοΈ
Bars: Perfect π―
Delivery: Perfect π―
Impression: Perfect π―
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Wassup @thaphatlady, Thank you for sharing 'where does the end begin' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us: Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. π Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! πΆ Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ The flow definitely bled through the beat, we can tell you are passionate about getting this off your chest. Vocal tone is perfect. You just missing the clarity of mix and the recording is a bit muddy in places. We can def hear you moving around while recording. This time you just missed out on Featuring π, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try and test out the distance between you and the micπ€ before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! β¨ - Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! βπ₯ - Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! π - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! π― It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Love β€οΈ this nice beat Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
I enjoyed this flow instantly π Bars: On point π― Delivery: On point π― Impression: On point π―
nice π₯π₯π₯ I would say bring your voice up but π₯ Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
I can tell you got a good flow.but you need to turn your ποΈ up. Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
I like this and the title is nice. love the beat here. great job on this track. π₯π₯΅ Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
voice suits this trippy sounding Bars: Nice π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
Nice kp goin.. Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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Nicely done βοΈ π₯ Iβll say turn vocals up a tad bit and itβs great π₯πͺ Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
didn't see this one coming.. nice build up. Definitely add a lil more volume to your voice in the editor. great job moving into that second beat!! this is the first track I haven't had to turn off ππ!! keep making this!! 315 to 345 are perfect. could feel the confidence. keep up the great work HMU whenever βΊοΈ Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Bars: On point π― Delivery: Nice π Impression: On point π―
Nice flow the problem is that you're whispering Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
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Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―