when the mask cracks
shadow you shadow me shadow we, shadow you shadow me shadow we, the mask begins to Crack, and we are sent aback, our world is in misharmony, and honestly we need a veterinary to cure the disease that is plaguing our society, sadly we've ignored the fact that's its been that way since day one, obey or your done. the hate and greed breed while we plead to be freed. we hide behind our disguises never revealing what lies beneath, so many people talk about how they want the world to go back to the way it was, but I don't, I know I know I must be insane or maybe it's00โฐ just the fact that I can't deny what I feel inside we have been living a lie, truth is if we smash the mask and shine some light on the atrocities we could begin to fully heal put the pieces back togather like liquid gold filling the cracks, making us better than we ever had been before just shadow me and we could break free from the sorrow, build a better tomorrow. swallow the hollow bravado while they wallow in sorrow hidingthem ind tqhp]e mask
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Hey @shadowviking, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'when the mask cracks'! ๐ฅ "our world is in misharmony, and honestly we need a veterinary" your delivery was so good, love the complex rhymes and the deeper message. Tell that story!! Great concept, we love it. ๐คฏ Your delivery on this track is amazing, so smooth!! ๐ You picked the perfect beat for this one, this sounds great. ๐งจ This time you just missed out on Featuring ๐, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! ๐ง Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! ๐ค We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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