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You got great bars here.Not only that but your ad libs that you used to infuse the beat with your vibe was good. Very smart π Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. π
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"That's why I'm always staring into the souls of the ones who want to grow!" Love the flow on this part fam it was super ill!
Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin'
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @aaronhammockofficial! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'TheyComeAround Ft.AYYLI3N'! π₯ You got great bars here.Not only that but your ad libs that you used to infuse the beat with your vibe was good. Very smart π Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ Love the story telling on this track, it's engaging. π We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. πΆ This beat choice is great for you! Next time turn your vocals up a bit fam, it'll do you a lot more justice to have leveled out vocals! πΌ "That's why I'm always staring into the souls of the ones who want to grow!" Love the flow on this part fam it was super ill! Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin' All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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