Writing Exercise #1 (Simile)

Writing Exercise #1 (Similes) rip your arm and stick where u put it like u ripped off a branch rip the charm and the click like you ripped off a brand gold all i see gold all i see gold all i see like i'm midas with an indice, crushing a drum is like rushing a bum if they broke they got nun but they got nun like its a church or sumn hand on america finger on my gun in the palm of my hands as if i shoot i must run, next up metaphors for writing exercise 2, guess what u lost ur cool like an iceberg that is melting rain tapping my roof like the water toedancing but it hard like bullets pelting im full of soul like my name is marvin gaye im martin days, everyone saying smooth criminal my name is mike jack i grew in a hood where we had pretty young thugs so give the mike back, look at reflections in the water like it is a mirror when the smoke clears then youll see me clearer