Repent/confess
didn't have christ in my life was a mad man broken fill with pain and hurting I just got to know did you really really say that you love me so opening my eyes thought I was woke fighting these demons so really got to love each other until thy end so I'm good tho not christ in my life can't stand up and fight can't fight till I'm right need jesus in my life bumping you thought I was running being humble no fronting looking at the wrong things doing the wrong things being with the wrong things. loving the wrong things. see when i didn't understand lord I was playing with the bible like a was baby toy now I got it man its like im using roids now picking up the bible flowing like I'm really brand new. yo we got to repent man this is not it the life to go jesus know what we dealing with he knows your pain he knows your hurting so just give it up didn't have christ in my life was a mad man broken feel with pain and hurting I just got to know did you really really say that you love me so now I'm woke
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