Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

What's up @mellyword, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'A.B.M (All Bout Money) (01:06:35)'! 💥 Really cool vibes for your first freestyle! 🌟 Your rhyming is tight. ✨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍 Try being a bit more fluid with your flows! Right now its a bit static, so joining the flows more or adding some adlibs could defo help! 🎶 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 The recording quality is quite low tho, it would be great to improve it somehow. You can always clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Savage factz

2 years ago

#savagefactz Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Judge.

2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉