Hey @lilh2o,
We appreciate you sharing 'Heartbreaker (version 2)' with us! π₯
You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π
Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! πΌ
The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. The effects are a bit too much for this track, try not to overuse them.
You got a raw and gritty track here and we think that's great you found your own sound. We know you can flow well on this beat, you just need to ensure this is consistent throughout the whole track. We think that you need to tone it down on the effects on this track as it's tarnishing the quality and potential of this track!
We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
definitely hearing the message... like your enthusiasm... I would use less auto tune.... less robotic... I would feel the beat more... so there's not so much fall off... with a little work... I definitely think you have potential!!!
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Hey @lilh2o, We appreciate you sharing 'Heartbreaker (version 2)' with us! π₯ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! πΌ The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. The effects are a bit too much for this track, try not to overuse them. You got a raw and gritty track here and we think that's great you found your own sound. We know you can flow well on this beat, you just need to ensure this is consistent throughout the whole track. We think that you need to tone it down on the effects on this track as it's tarnishing the quality and potential of this track! We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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