Hi there @thehost,
Here's some feedback on your track 'The one man army ', thank you for sharing with us! π₯
Some seriously impressive rhyming in here, you know what you're doing for sure. You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. π
Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
The general audio quality is lacking, cleaning that up will instantly boost this track.
The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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bonjour je vous souhaite une bonne chance
i see u making a debut nice track meehn its dope π₯π₯
Hi there @thehost, Here's some feedback on your track 'The one man army ', thank you for sharing with us! π₯ Some seriously impressive rhyming in here, you know what you're doing for sure. You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. π Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π Great beat choice, really works with the track! The general audio quality is lacking, cleaning that up will instantly boost this track. The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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