Hey @sb.7215269,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on '308 mob'! ๐ฅ
Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. ๐ Your rhyming is tight. โจ There's a nice concept here running through the track, nice job.
We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. ๐ถ
Make sure to remember your โwhyโ when you rap. Stay true to yourself on this rap journey and give it your all!
You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
๐ค Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Great ๐
Hey @sb.7215269, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on '308 mob'! ๐ฅ Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. ๐ Your rhyming is tight. โจ There's a nice concept here running through the track, nice job. We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. ๐ถ Make sure to remember your โwhyโ when you rap. Stay true to yourself on this rap journey and give it your all! You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Litt๐ฅ๐ฅ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
I can barely hear u. Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Zoeboy You are doing good Fam โ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Can improve ๐
๐ฅ๐ฅ follow your boy Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
cool as Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
great and dope Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: On point ๐ฏ Impression: On point ๐ฏ
okay I see you! keep grinding! Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Good ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: Nice ๐ Impression: Can improve ๐