My luv
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what is luv/I chopped it up like a onion/don't cry/don't lie/u know u want me/until I die/u know u coming /don't try to act funny/u know I make u sing/like Sunday/u know u don't want to be lonely/ u want to leave/go/kick rocks/hit the door/I don't care bout ur money/don't care bout u going /u leave that's funny/I got the keys/to ur heart/own it/them other niggas phony/ur bullshit/I want it/luv u girl/u my world/put u first/eat u out/to clinch my thirst/like a dolphin I dive/in it works/don't switch sides/cause that hurts/enjoy my vibe/in one day/we going to be in church/2
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Yo @deonbanks.75! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'My luv'! π₯ There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. This track needs a bit of work. We can hear your passion for rap and we like the energy. However, the recording quality has really let you down. If you can work on this and ensure your vocals are crisp we know your tracks will live up to their potential! You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! π Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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Incredible flow, major kudos, riding beats with finesse and style! ππ€ Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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