Yo @JaylanTyler,
It's time for us to take a look at 'Rapstar remix'! π₯
Good bars here, defo works here! π The rhyming is well put together. β¨
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π
Awesome beat, it really makes your track stand out! π§¨
The recording quality is good, nicely done! β
Loving the laid back vibe here! π
This is a really cool take on a classic modern banger, we just wish the vocals were a little less muffled by the effects.
You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @JaylanTyler, It's time for us to take a look at 'Rapstar remix'! π₯ Good bars here, defo works here! π The rhyming is well put together. β¨ Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! πΆ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π Awesome beat, it really makes your track stand out! 𧨠The recording quality is good, nicely done! β Loving the laid back vibe here! π This is a really cool take on a classic modern banger, we just wish the vocals were a little less muffled by the effects. You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€ We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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