TakeMeAway (22:23:02)

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TakeMeAway (22:23:02)

Take me away take to me to a better place go to sleep and never wake pray the lord my soul to take Cuz I wanna go away and I want to go today I don’t Really wanna wait I’m just tired of all pain I know what I’m missin its you I know that im trippin it’s true I can’t see a future with her cuz my head is so wrapped around you I know that sad but it true I walk with a smile through the room You couldn’t walk a mile in my shoes I been walking through fire since two The wisdom I get from this life the knowledge of wrong and what’s right be careful who say that you love because their the ones that’s holding the knife They come for u in the cold of the night When your cozy and warm and in the light They take you and feed you all these lies Like they always gonna be there by your side but you know when u need them they never gon ride

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

Hey @faac2gsdna, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'TakeMeAway (22:23:02)'! 💥 Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Try using some of our vocal FX (ft. Autotune!) to spice up your next track! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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10 months ago

nice

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