Hey @cselph,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'DMensions'! π₯
Feelin' the bars here, we like it! The rhyming is well put together. β¨
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ Your timing is great, nicely done. π
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ
We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Effects can help improve tracks, but be careful not to overuse them.
Damn you really slid on this. Your cadence and flow go hard, the vocals just sound a little muffled and metallic though. A couple tweaks to the mix and you've got yourself a banger.
A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @cselph, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'DMensions'! π₯ Feelin' the bars here, we like it! The rhyming is well put together. β¨ Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ Your timing is great, nicely done. π Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Effects can help improve tracks, but be careful not to overuse them. Damn you really slid on this. Your cadence and flow go hard, the vocals just sound a little muffled and metallic though. A couple tweaks to the mix and you've got yourself a banger. A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€ Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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