Yo @lip.mort69,
It's time for us to take a look at 'Fire'! 💥
Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit?
Perfecting your rhymes will help give your bars more structure and purpose.
The flow here is a bit off, to make the most of your track try and improve on this.
Good choice of beat here! 🎼
Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Yo @lip.mort69, It's time for us to take a look at 'Fire'! 💥 Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Perfecting your rhymes will help give your bars more structure and purpose. The flow here is a bit off, to make the most of your track try and improve on this. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Love the beat you chose. Try to keep a metronome next to you so you stay on beat and keep your cadence when you spit !! 💯🙏🏼
NEED SOME MORE BASS IN YOU'RE VOICE AND KEEP DOING IT FOR AS LONG AS YOU LIVE
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