Hey @daivionjohnson,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'op'! 💥
We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌 We like the rhyming, it's tight. ✨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows!
Good choice of beat here! 🎼
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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my best song I made man
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Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯
sounds good, keep at it 💯 Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: Nice 🌟 Impression: Dope 🔥
great Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: On point 🎯
I wan hear more from you keep working bro 🤧✅🔥
Hey @daivionjohnson, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'op'! 💥 We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌 We like the rhyming, it's tight. ✨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍 This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
This pretty fire, the only thing i would recommend is rap louder or then your vocals up but other than that its fye🔥
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