work on the words a bit more don't be simply with the words make other rewind back and listen to the words you said and look them up
put more feelings into it
but besides that your track is good
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Impression: Dope π₯
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My fuken destiny. I gotta fat
Cuh no joke I banged it freestyle when you stopped and on point fuck! Would you mind if I ft. In the end? Dm we can talk
Haha banging work here bro, π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯
π€§ flowz π― respect from South Carolina keep grinding π―π₯
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Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
delivery need work s lil off beat Bars: Great π Delivery: Can improve π Impression: Can improve π
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Keep up the good work my boyπ―πͺπ₯ Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Okay destiny child destroyed the purity of this song its perfect
to long bro but hard i need to hear you more Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
u need to work with the beat better and more clarity Bars: Can improve π Delivery: Can improve π Impression: Can improve π
work on the words a bit more don't be simply with the words make other rewind back and listen to the words you said and look them up put more feelings into it but besides that your track is good Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
hell yeah fam π―π―π― Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
keep the fire burnin
Flow getting better keep it up
Get it T! Solid, feel the vibe. Heat!