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Hey @nadeer21,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Trapped in Wonderland'! π₯
Vocals bit unclear on this one, try recording closer to your mic.
Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly.
Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks.
We think a great step to take would be to try one of our Masterclasses to help perfect your rapping skillset.
We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Trapped in wonderland is a metaphor for Battling Drug addiction. A Me vs. Me scenario
I got new battle please comment much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance π π― hope you enjoy what u hear π π― #TmCaptainComplain
good job fam like this flow instantly π π
Hey @nadeer21, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Trapped in Wonderland'! π₯ Vocals bit unclear on this one, try recording closer to your mic. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. We think a great step to take would be to try one of our Masterclasses to help perfect your rapping skillset. We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
this is really dope , check out my profile when you have time
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Itβs good but not the best, next time try not to talk bc in this track ur more of talking than rapping, but it is a very good track.
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