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Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Moonwalk'! π₯
Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ
The delivery is ferocious! Bringin' the heat!
Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
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Hey @fattboiibihh813, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Moonwalk'! π₯ Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. π Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. πΌ The delivery is ferocious! Bringin' the heat! Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€ We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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