Hey @american_citizen_x,
We appreciate you sharing 'YOU AND ME' with us! ๐ฅ
Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. ๐ง
Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! โจ
Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. ๐ถ Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat.
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. ๐ผ
The track definitely has potential, we like your conversational style of flow and the straightforwardness, but there's some issues with the content and there were a few times you missed the beat. The effects are also overdone and we think this kind of low key track would benefit from a more natural vocal sound.
You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. ๐ค
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @american_citizen_x, We appreciate you sharing 'YOU AND ME' with us! ๐ฅ Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. ๐ง Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! โจ Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. ๐ถ Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. ๐ผ The track definitely has potential, we like your conversational style of flow and the straightforwardness, but there's some issues with the content and there were a few times you missed the beat. The effects are also overdone and we think this kind of low key track would benefit from a more natural vocal sound. You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. ๐ค We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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