wanna go to fat burger
down to my last throw away and mask bout to hit this lick like a hostile witness send the whole crew up in this bitch we all taken lives so we know there aint no snitch behind the big homie striker kickin in the door tried to tell him no but but he put 3 in yo face mask now this bitch is crying looking at is funny all i got to say is bitch wheres the money dont try to play hard cuz if the beating from the handle dont put u down i know the bullet will look at striker he said put the bitch in the trunk if worst come to worst we put her on street and send her ass to work. yo we got to get something or am goin leave this bitch stinkin like a diaper in the dumpster striker check the kitchen ill take the bed room if that bitch dont tell us put one in head soon. didn't find shit committed a couple murdered fuck it striker lets go get a burger. ๐
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down to my last throw away and mask bout to hit this lick like a hostile witness send the whole crew up in this bitch we all taken lives so we know there aint no snitch behind the big homie striker kickin in the door tried to tell him no but but he put 3 in yo face mask now this bitch is crying looking at is funny all i got to say is bitch wheres the money dont try to play hard cuz if the beating from the handle dont put u down i know the bullet will look at striker he said put the bitch in the trunk if worst come to worst we put her on street and send her ass to work. yo we got to get something or am goin leave this bitch stinkin like a diaper in the dumpster striker check the kitchen ill take the bed room if that bitch dont tell us put one in head soon. didn't find shit committed a couple murdered fuck it striker lets go get a burger. ๐
I like yo shit too...you funny as hell on that song..keep doing you brah..you different
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Yo @keithpezzy, It's time for us to take a look at 'wanna go to fat burger'! ๐ฅ The vocals aren't coming out clear, test different mic positions and try to keep the distance between you and the mic consistent. Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. ๐ We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. ๐ผ Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. ๐ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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