Hey @jerellrichardson,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Money Flow 💰💰💰💰'! 💥
Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌
Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼
Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @jerellrichardson, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Money Flow 💰💰💰💰'! 💥 Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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