Wassup @NiomiHurtado,
Thank you for sharing 'Dark House' with our community ๐ฅ. Here is a little feedback from us:
The vocals are a lil' loud. That's OK, just slide the volume down a bit and you've got yourself a perfect mix.
Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'!
We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. ๐ถ Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped.
Your bars sound amazing over this beat. Great choice!! ๐งจ
The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Try adding, adjusting and removing effects to find what works best for the track.
We really loved your flow on this and we totally see what you're going for, we'd just love to hear the track cleaned up around the edges!
You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Wassup @NiomiHurtado, Thank you for sharing 'Dark House' with our community ๐ฅ. Here is a little feedback from us: The vocals are a lil' loud. That's OK, just slide the volume down a bit and you've got yourself a perfect mix. Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. ๐ถ Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. Your bars sound amazing over this beat. Great choice!! ๐งจ The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Try adding, adjusting and removing effects to find what works best for the track. We really loved your flow on this and we totally see what you're going for, we'd just love to hear the track cleaned up around the edges! You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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