Tommy boy
Fore$kinThink it all just started when he was a child Tommy was a youngin so he goin wild People always judged him cuz he go all out Then he started running started skipping out Started hangin round with losers that gon bring him down, only time he frowning when he running out So he called the plug up beep beep pull up now 2 weeks later tommy on the same shit Shoving needles in his vain cuz it’s a pain switch He so hooked that when he off he just feel shook and get so freaked out that he took the last lil money that he had to buy a gun but now he’s broke ain’t got no hope to buy no dope then he called his bro and he said he know a guy that’s got some coke but remember tommy broke but his buddy didn’t know that tommy planned to blow that mf wit the pole But he called the dude up Tommy ready for a shoot up Got the 9 up in his hand And then he left out for the pick up Tommy didn’t know that dude was crippin Pistol rippin 9 body vicious villain But tommy boy was chillin all he wanted was his fix Dude was parked up in his car on the far side of the park tommy creeped up it was dark tommy shot off 7 shots blew the windows out his car damn then he looked up in the whip and no one in it Heard the shotty cock tommy turned back Everything went black Tommy fell back
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