Hey @spxcemxn23,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Lonely Hearts'! 💥
Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. 👍
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼
You have an amazing voice fam! Would tighten up the mix but the flow is crazy. In some areas the singing could be a bit more on key. Dope cover, try some text on it next time!
Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @spxcemxn23, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Lonely Hearts'! 💥 Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. 👍 Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 You have an amazing voice fam! Would tighten up the mix but the flow is crazy. In some areas the singing could be a bit more on key. Dope cover, try some text on it next time! Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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