Hey @JaylanTyler!
Thanks for sharing 'Untitled 76' with us! ๐ฅ
Good bars here, defo works here! ๐ Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. ๐
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ Your timing is great, nicely done. ๐
Recording quality distracting from the overall feel of the track fam! Def wanna watch the levels of the mix and even the distance you record from the mic because it all matters.
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @JaylanTyler! Thanks for sharing 'Untitled 76' with us! ๐ฅ Good bars here, defo works here! ๐ Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. ๐ Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ Your timing is great, nicely done. ๐ Recording quality distracting from the overall feel of the track fam! Def wanna watch the levels of the mix and even the distance you record from the mic because it all matters. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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