so let me break it down a little further ocean of motion the ocean is the air the motion is your thought waves and they are invisible and float around bounce hitting people they affect people their thoughts affect you. you got to learn to discern
Yo @ryanpetersen58!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Ocean of Motion'! 💥
Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic?
Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it.
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼
The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality.
You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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so let me break it down a little further ocean of motion the ocean is the air the motion is your thought waves and they are invisible and float around bounce hitting people they affect people their thoughts affect you. you got to learn to discern
Yo @ryanpetersen58! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Ocean of Motion'! 💥 Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: Great 🎉