Hey @JaylanTyler,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Untitled 49', here are our thoughts π₯
There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear.
Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. π Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. π
Definitely see what you was doing here mane. Glad you was able to get the emotion out for this track. Would def try and work on the delivery and recording quality. Thatβs your next point of focus. Keep goinβ!
There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. π€
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @JaylanTyler, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Untitled 49', here are our thoughts π₯ There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. π Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. π Definitely see what you was doing here mane. Glad you was able to get the emotion out for this track. Would def try and work on the delivery and recording quality. Thatβs your next point of focus. Keep goinβ! There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. π€ It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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