snail
Why do I still try , and wait for you Why do I waste my time trying to capture you I'm told to treat you the same way , your suppose to treat others the way they treat you but with you , I can't let go , I see what you do , what you create and wish I'm apart of it.You claim I'm not yours but someone special but it doesn't feel that way after I denied your request , now your distant now , hiding behind your fog of desires you only focus on you but what about me , do you think I enjoy being left on open or left alone , I don't , I don't like begging for attention at all , I don't even know why I still do it first of all,When I'm numb I can feel nothing at all , but a part of me still wants all of you even if that means giving you what you please then having you throw me to the side when your through with me , I can't keep letting you ruining my mood , I can't keep putting upwith all this bullshit dealing you , I got my sister out here trying to show me right from wrong , my dumbass out here still trying to finish this song , I can't keep letting you drown me out , no matter how much you try to cast me out I can't keep letting you get what you want
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Hey @lynniilynnii, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'snail ', here are our thoughts 💥 Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 Try improving your recording quality if you can. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎