Hey @dorianmoxley.7577!
Thanks for sharing 'Proceed with Caution' with us! 💥
Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. 🙌 Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall!
Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect.
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks.
We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @dorianmoxley.7577! Thanks for sharing 'Proceed with Caution' with us! 💥 Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. 🙌 Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. Great beat choice, really works with the track! Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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