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Hey @jaythizzman.6940419! Thanks for sharing '3 cross bosses ' with us! π₯ Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! π§ Strong bars on this, keep it up! π We like the rhymes in here, good job.β¨ This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. This track is really powerful. A lot of emotion here. π Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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