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J will tha freestyle hero

4 years ago

🔥 📛 👩‍🚒 🚒 🧯 🎆 🔥 📛

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hi there @jwiljr, Here's some feedback on your track 'first day on', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧 Try repositioning your mic to get them vocals sounding clean. Your bars are real good, keep doin' what your doin'. 🙌 Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Try adding some of our built in audio effects which could really help boost this track! Love the flow on here fam! Sound off compared to the beat a bit, think your vocals are coming thru way too loud! Keep grindin’ fam! You’ll get it! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jorel Williams

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4 years ago

thanks for the support

Lost Bwoi i

4 years ago

dope asf fam nice work👏👏👏👏🔥check my new up Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯

J will tha freestyle hero

4 years ago

keep on grinding 💪

Big Balla

2 months ago