Hey @masi27,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'mi vida '! ๐ฅ
Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix.
You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. ๐ Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. โจ
We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. ๐ถ You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! ๐
Fire beat, it makes the track even more dope. ๐งจ
We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Nice use of vocal effects! Helps your track pop!
When someone just wants to chill, this is the song they should listen to. Such a vibe! ๐
There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. ๐ค
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @masi27, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'mi vida '! ๐ฅ Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. ๐ Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. โจ We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. ๐ถ You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! ๐ Fire beat, it makes the track even more dope. ๐งจ We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Nice use of vocal effects! Helps your track pop! When someone just wants to chill, this is the song they should listen to. Such a vibe! ๐ There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. ๐ค It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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