Hey @jackdillingham.6700529,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'City_lights'! 💥
Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall!
Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠
Good choice of beat! 🎼
See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track.
You really showed your emotions on this, we respect the hell out of that. 💜
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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man thank you bro. you don't know how much this inspires me. I will take a look at your music and show love and give honest feedback.
Hey @jackdillingham.6700529, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'City_lights'! 💥 Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠 Good choice of beat! 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. You really showed your emotions on this, we respect the hell out of that. 💜 With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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