Yo @eddievegas!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'EddieVegas$$$seashell'! π₯
Turning the vocal volume up a notch would really improve the mix. Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little!
You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. π Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. β¨ Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π
Dope flow on this mane but the recording quality could be a bit better fam! You def got what it takes so with a few changes you'll be next level!
Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @eddievegas! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'EddieVegas$$$seashell'! π₯ Turning the vocal volume up a notch would really improve the mix. Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little! You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. π Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. β¨ Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π Dope flow on this mane but the recording quality could be a bit better fam! You def got what it takes so with a few changes you'll be next level! Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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