you go make it
John Williams53 Plays
•16 Feb 2022
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Wassup @johnwilliams.6859651, Thank you for sharing 'you go make it' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Sweet work over that beat. Your timing was almost perfect. Great beat choice, really works with the track! The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Adding your own barz to your tracks real helps to show off your lyrical skill! You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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