What's up @jaylenbolton,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'My Heart'! π₯
You got great bars here. π Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π
Love the passion in your flows here. Got us in our feels! πΆ Your timing is perfect tho, you're landing clean on this beat. π
This beat choice is great for you! πΌ
The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it?
Try working on your use of effects on the vocals - you've made a good start but the delivery needs some work! π There's a ton of stuff on online to help you perfect this! βοΈ
Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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the emotion in this song is real and you bring it to life man! I love it! keep it up
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What's up @jaylenbolton, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'My Heart'! π₯ You got great bars here. π Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π Love the passion in your flows here. Got us in our feels! πΆ Your timing is perfect tho, you're landing clean on this beat. π This beat choice is great for you! πΌ The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? Try working on your use of effects on the vocals - you've made a good start but the delivery needs some work! π There's a ton of stuff on online to help you perfect this! βοΈ Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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