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Hey @liltim.6720596, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'eMastered_my-story-5'! π₯ Try cleaning up the vocal recording quality by recording a little closer to the mic! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! π Great beat choice, really works with the track! Really feeling the emotion on this track, hits real hard. π Talent + hard work = great rap! And you got it!! Seriously impressed with this, ain't easy to be vulnerable and let it out on the track like that and paint a vivid picture. All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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