Yo @dougieis!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'always'! 💥
Great concept. Love the story your bars tell!
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏
Good choice of beat! 🎼
The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time.
We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Yo @dougieis! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'always'! 💥 Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 Good choice of beat! 🎼 The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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