LA killa
LoganvilleI am the LA killa, cause she a thrilla, if you see me on the streets you gonna be a quitta, I gonna mix you up like vanilla, whos betta King Kong the gorilla or godzIlla? I gonna sneak up on you stab you in the back like a ninja, you may think I'm a friend but I'm just your average killa,
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nice๐๐๐๐ฆ๐ฏ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
What's up @foxysplaytime, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'LA killa'! ๐ฅ Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! ๐ง The vocals are a little unclear. Try experimenting with the mic position to improve that. Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. ๐ The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Try not to overuse effects, it can be better to use less to give your track a more raw, personal feel. Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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