first trails (beats prod. by Soundmain)

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just give my first try into this genre and mixing it . Sorry for some distortion due to poor editing. tell me what you guys think and hit the like and follow me for more improvement In the future yea,i be rolling like i'm rammstein cause mankind aren't that kind you'd be falling i'll be calling while you're lying in that van i'd be slaying. i don't need no brand cause i'm gucci i am absolute and you're just maybe you keep hatin and i'll be ballin just hold that 4 and you keep crawlin fuck blaming, cause there ain't no game keep running, track on my trail and it will never be the same lines after lines,spitting fire with some kicks not converse but i have my verse in a mix tick tick tick just waiting for the bomb watch me light it and smash it like i am king kong turn back,fall back ,hold up , i'll get my contract just haters and no players the audience to my creator matter of fact,these are my tracks just listen and learn what you lack can't keep up you better pace it chinaman on the lead you better face it you keep fake it and i'll make it (i'll be getting busy and you're just lazy) yeah ok, skip the pause and go play careful of what they gonna say ,watch out gotta keep the heat at bay waow, hot damn man's not hot but i'm blowing the lid stop right there i'm hearing the beat, OMG i'm feeling the heat grinding gears with a prospect wait a little and you'll be perplexed i ain't rolling with the same sense i'm glowing with my own chance yea, that's right got a grasp on it with my chopsticks chinaman on the scene with no side kick prejudice in my way i'll blast it

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YangTheYoung

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4 years ago

1drebo

4 years ago

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#CapitolJames

4 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @yangtheyoung! Thanks for sharing 'first trails (beats prod. by Soundmain)' with us! 💥 Jheez! This mix is perfect, you have a great mix between your vocals and the beat. ✅ You got great bars here. 🙌 Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Try developing and mixing up your flows to keep listeners on their toes. Your lyrics are there but you need to slow down a bit bro! Your vocal levels are dope but definitely find the rhythm so the words can do the work they're supposed to. Keep grindin! We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Leavem petrified

3 months ago

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Cairo Snow FPTO (Supreme Cai)

3 months ago

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Black LogiCrak

5 months ago

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Mr.nolo (the endgameboss)

5 months ago

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