Monotone. That’s the word I’m looking for - improve that and it’s good. Sounds like LetterKenny the TV show and how they all talk. Send to Rapfame I bet anything they will say the same. But interesting bars would also help. Unique shit
Here is real Criticism- honestly / the first vocals were filtered heavy and sound bad/ the second vocals sounded great/ the girl was ok/ the final vocals weren’t great too low/ bars nothing impressive or new- definitely get something kinda witty or add a joke and change tone more - sounds very Boring to be strait like monotone rapping for the majority. Whoever the second and third vocals were. They are really good and dude- even you gotta admit they are best ones on this track. I would start there and get sound levels worked out especially
If you hear another artist/ say “damn up the vocals/ or gotta work on timing” shit like this is what this whole things is about.
Hope you learn something.
Hope you learn a lesson
Don’t toss stones on peoples comment boxes when your shit amateur
- and I don’t hate on artist- your the first one ☝️ I always support other amateurs on here/ but if you go around starting trouble you have expect that to come back to you bro. What comes around goes around.
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Monotone. That’s the word I’m looking for - improve that and it’s good. Sounds like LetterKenny the TV show and how they all talk. Send to Rapfame I bet anything they will say the same. But interesting bars would also help. Unique shit
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Here is real Criticism- honestly / the first vocals were filtered heavy and sound bad/ the second vocals sounded great/ the girl was ok/ the final vocals weren’t great too low/ bars nothing impressive or new- definitely get something kinda witty or add a joke and change tone more - sounds very Boring to be strait like monotone rapping for the majority. Whoever the second and third vocals were. They are really good and dude- even you gotta admit they are best ones on this track. I would start there and get sound levels worked out especially
If you hear another artist/ say “damn up the vocals/ or gotta work on timing” shit like this is what this whole things is about. Hope you learn something.
Hope you learn a lesson Don’t toss stones on peoples comment boxes when your shit amateur - and I don’t hate on artist- your the first one ☝️ I always support other amateurs on here/ but if you go around starting trouble you have expect that to come back to you bro. What comes around goes around.
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