Hi @papihunt!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Heart Stoppa Feat.(Jay-Rill)'! ๐ฅ
Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out.
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. ๐
Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ผ
The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it?
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Illove vocals๐ฏโค๏ธโ๐ฅ Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
bro you sound like a mix of Jay Z and Yachty this fye ๐ฅ๐ฅ Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: On point ๐ฏ Impression: Great ๐
Hi @papihunt! Welcome to our feedback of 'Heart Stoppa Feat.(Jay-Rill)'! ๐ฅ Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out. Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. ๐ Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. ๐ผ The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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