What's up @dlyan,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Egyptian Dubstep - DLYAN'! π₯
The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound.
Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π
Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Timing is a difficult task, try ensure that you're on beat with your next track!
Play around to find the perfect beat for your bars.
Ngl, you're hard to make out in some areas, but we love the original concept and the effort here. Try rerecording your vocals with a bit more emotion and aggression and see how it comes out! Yup you're on the way!
Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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What's up @dlyan, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Egyptian Dubstep - DLYAN'! π₯ The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Timing is a difficult task, try ensure that you're on beat with your next track! Play around to find the perfect beat for your bars. Ngl, you're hard to make out in some areas, but we love the original concept and the effort here. Try rerecording your vocals with a bit more emotion and aggression and see how it comes out! Yup you're on the way! Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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