Hey @eristar.6706393,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Eri star-love you'! 💥
Vocals bit unclear on this one, try recording closer to your mic.
Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it.
This beat choice is great for you! 🎼
See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track.
Your next track could sound even better with some vocal FX. Why not try our set in the studio?
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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#love you
Hey @eristar.6706393, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Eri star-love you'! 💥 Vocals bit unclear on this one, try recording closer to your mic. Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Your next track could sound even better with some vocal FX. Why not try our set in the studio? Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
I like the flow of the words
nice song man show my songs some love fam #uni7
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