Hey @rojoloco,
Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'shitswackfreestyle'! π₯
Your voice sounds super clear, keep recording like that! π€
Your flow is a little off, we think you can really tighten things up there. You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! π
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ
Off beat at times but it's almost a satire so we definitely see what you were doing with this track. And we agree #crackiswack. Spread the message! Fun track lol!
You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @rojoloco, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'shitswackfreestyle'! π₯ Your voice sounds super clear, keep recording like that! π€ Your flow is a little off, we think you can really tighten things up there. You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! π Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ Off beat at times but it's almost a satire so we definitely see what you were doing with this track. And we agree #crackiswack. Spread the message! Fun track lol! You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€ We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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